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manifold
03-19-2003, 04:24 AM
:trigger (just in case)This is a poem about being consumed by an ed, about emotions being stolen from you and about the senseless despair.

the solitary tear


have you seen the solitary tear
fallen from frozen eyes?
the rock is crumbling and fading,
its all been part of the lie

no mask to cover the wrinkles
light shatters the ageing skin
scars of sights and sounds
of all the tears within

harsh words of conversation
don't hurt the blunt and bold
but they freeze the sensitive heart
they make my world feel cold

words only show the anger
of the tears you'll never see
emotions buried deeply
in a rough and raging sea

and the waves wildly crash
against the drifting raft
inflicting without feeling
the pain to the human heart

but not a tear at all
its taken in its stride
only the pain of feeling
there's nothing left inside

:love mani

JolieAnn
03-19-2003, 07:21 AM
:hugon Mani :hugoff

That is an amazing piece of writing. Thank you so much for sharing that here. :love

Kdestiny
03-19-2003, 07:38 AM
:love Mani :love

As always I'm amazed by your talent!

manifold
03-19-2003, 03:54 PM
Thankyou

:love mani

manifold
03-19-2003, 10:21 PM
Sorry i forgot to add please make any comments or criticism as that usually helps me when writing the next thing

:love mani