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LilThought
03-07-2003, 11:23 PM
Fishies, im not going to cower from my only source of support. If poetry is the only way I can express myself on a person, feelings level that has naught a single thing to do with food and behaviors well, so be it. Actually, this was a journal entry. It is simply how it came out, i suppose that is rather odd.

Raindrops

since when do raindrops cry
blueness, dreary blueness
pouring from the palest sky
tiny, tear shaped crystals
droplets by and by
Tis a many, Tis a many, Tis a many
escapee melancholy fevers
natures whimpering worries
washed away into winter
by the daintiest flowers I’ve ever seen
Lost, Lost, Lost
from within a wreckage
my very own storm cloud
my deep sea diver
my synchronized orchestra
harmonious, tainted raindrops
these eyes, these mirrors, these eyes
these shallow, hallow curses
break the broken bruises
feeble as they are
purple and blue—blue and purple
these lifeless little lies
I never knew, I never knew, I never knew
here, in my pocket
all things are kept here in my pocket
my maleficent friend
falling, desolate raindrops
perusing on their way in
why do raindrops cry
they simply do, they hover and fly
all they ever do, they cry, cry, cry.

JLM

jenya
03-08-2003, 02:08 AM
:hugon Jamie :hugoff

Glad you are not cowering... glad to be reading your poems again.... glad you are allowing yourself this expression ... :love

Jenya :turtle

Joyliz
03-12-2003, 11:08 PM
Glad to hear you are allowing yourself to express your real emotions. Your poem was great. Know that you will feel better by allowing your emotions to come out and being able to live your life free of it all. Blessings,
~Joy-Liz :usa