Hopeless

[rubygrrl]

Another useless piece of writing.

Hopeless

She stares into the bleakness
Of disarray
And feels that there is no return
This is the path that is comforting
Yet scary at times too

It is a security blanket to her
So why should she do things
Any other way
Despite the consequences

She knows that she is scarred for life
The damage is irreversible
But yet she feels that she is not bad enough
Though some disagree

She hates where she is at
But yet she still holds on
She is not yet readly to leave it all behind

Giving up on it all
Seems to tempting
When all she feels is the bleakness of despair

[seekinghelp]

Stop putting your writing down!
You wrote how you feel, sometimes poetry makes it easier. You should keep writing.

[clown]

This is really great hun.....thanks for sharing the in most part you......when you share how you are feeling it can never be invalidated.

Love ya, clown:butterfly

[rubygrrl]

:hugon Heather :hugoff

:hugon Clown :hugoff

Thank you both for your kind words. I am always :shy about posting stuff like this, because firstly, I am no writer, and secondly, because it's putting it out there about me. Hope I make some sense.

[pooh bear fan]

:hugon irish :hugoff gosh honey, i feel like that girl.
you have a real talent hon