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kiara
02-01-2003, 01:27 AM
Happiness and thinness,
Will they ever be one and the same?
Or will thinness eat away,
At any chance of pure joy?

Can one ever be happy and be thin,
Or does being too thin lead to a personal sin?
A sin against your only chance of being happy,
Once and for all.

But then, what is pure happiness,
But not to be thin.
Is there anymore to life,
That can be found within?


I havent written a poem in years, so this was my first attempt to try to express some of my thoughts.

Seabiscuit
02-01-2003, 08:46 PM
that is such a beautiful poem! :happy:flower:stsrs
I love to write poetry - it helps me out so much! great job :)

Broken_hearted
02-02-2003, 12:41 AM
:gimmehug:hugonKiara:hugoff:gimmehug

That poem was so great honey! You should write more and post them here!

Good on you for expressing yourself!

:love Kate