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manifold
01-27-2003, 07:25 AM
:trigger (just in case, proceed with caution)



A face
I do not
Wish to see
Stares back
At me
Connected to
A body
I do not
Wish to own
Fragmented
My mind
Is lost
Dealing with
The unwanted
Connection

:stars:stars:stars



I have tasted
Everything
But life
Free of restriction
Free of expectation
Devoid of emotion
I am consumed
By my own starvation
And wasting away
A life that could be
So much more


:stars:stars:stars


:love mani

Kdestiny
01-27-2003, 09:26 AM
:hugon Mani :hugoff

:love You have so much talent! I'm always thrilled when you share it with us. I still wish that I had more to say, but my words disappear sometimes.

You should enter your poetry into a contest or something. I'll email you a site that posts poetry, and has a contest as well. Whether or not you choose to share is up to you. I know how intimate writing is and how vulnerable we make ourselves when we share. I haven't entered anything in a couple years because of it. However; I really think that it would be wonderful for you to share your talent with the world. Just a thought.

I love you! Try to keep your head up angel.

Tara

clown
01-27-2003, 12:44 PM
wow....what amazing poems you have. You knwo you don't have to waste your life on an eating disorder. Recovery is possible and you can do it. Stay strong nad be healthy. I love you, clown:butterfly

manifold
01-28-2003, 04:59 AM
:hugon KD :hugoff
:hugon clown :hugoff

umm thanks
never really sure about posting my poems, like KD says its kinda makes u really vulnerable letting people in and seeing this stuff.

I guess i really hide in this forum for that reason, sorta knowing that not everyone reads stuff from here and that makes it a little safer but it is nice to know both of you read and replied and maybe related to some of what i was saying (cos I want my writing to say something to someone else as well as being an expression of my feelngs if that makes sense!)

Broken_hearted
01-29-2003, 08:06 AM
:hugonMani:hugoff

Thanks so much for posting those poems...they were really great!

See how good it feels when you open up like that and people see a bit of the real you? No one has rejected you either, because you ARE a lovely person with lots to give...

Are you starting to believe me yet? :happy

:love Kate