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LilThought
01-23-2003, 10:36 PM
fly,
why should i
fly

when i can crawl
on hands and knees.

it’s here,

under rocks,
under trees,
beneath seas,
beneath me.

here,

where broken arrows
twist, burn, lie.

these ruins,
they die

and i
i crawl,

with them,
beside them,
in them,
i am them.

too small to stand,
too great to fall.

i simply crawl.

Broken_hearted
01-29-2003, 08:17 AM
I love this poem too...your style is very unique and I do like it.

Writing poetry is a great way of expressing your feelings, and you do it really well.

:love Kate