poem i wrote

[bri]

i wrote this poem today. it really sucked. i barely worked on it. its almost just kind of like a rough draft, but i wanted to get it out.

I'm lost
I can't find my way
It's dark here
The candle I had, flickered out
Everyone is gone
I am alone
I'm surrounded by dead ends
and jagged rocks
cliffs and sandtraps
One step and I'm gone
I crawl into a ball
There is no one to comfort me
So i hold myself
But it doesnt comfort me
I'm cold
I'm lonely
I'm drained
I'm empty
I'm numb
I'm exhausted
And my choices are to give up, or try and find a way out
Why the fuck did the candle flame die???


alone-

abandoned
lonely
overbearing
nothing
empty

:love
bri

[tillie]

:hugonBri:hugoff

just want you to know I'm here for you. feel free to e-mail me anytime (the address in my sig)- if you need an outlet. take care and keep fighting. the rough times eventually pass, and the reward is so great. hang onto you. :love

Mary :butterfly

[Camellia]

:hugon :love Bri :love :hugoff

Wow. I finally made my way over to this side of the board to read your poem, and...wow. Bri, this is beautifully tragic. It is very emotional and telling of how you are feeling right now.... :hugon Bri :hugoff there is always a way out. Never give up. The daylight will eventually come so you can see your way out. And, you are not alone....

~ I can't wait to see more of your work....you do a beautiful job expressing yourself. ~

:love & :gimmehugs
:greenfish Camellia

[Catherose]

:hugonBri:hugoff
Thans for letting us read that! I'm just starting to really get into poetry. I wish I could write the way you do though! Keep it up girl... hope you're doing well, and if you're ever NOT- I'm here for ya!

:loveCatherine