My Poem *shy*

[J!]

I wrote in my journal last nite for the first time in over six months... I was flicking through it and noticed this poem I wrote ages ago. When I wrote it I was just messing about and was a bit bored and trying to occupy myself. Reading it back now it means so much more to me
I thought I;d share it to see your thoughts on it


My Fauxamie

I was Lost.
You found me.

I wanted control.
You gave it to me.

I needed a friend.
You were there for me.

I once believed this
But it was a lie.

I was lost
but you did not find me.
Instead you took my hand
And led me further from the truth.

I wanted control
but you did not give it to me.
Instead you took it
and made me depend on you.

I needed a friend
But you did not support me.
Instead you took my weaknesses
and made me weaker.

You arent my friend.
You never were.
You are my fauxamie.


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Jo
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[believeyoucan]

how very well written and true that is!
i'm glad you posted this...your words expressed how i'm sure many :fishy s have felt
keep writing!

[Malenkaya]

:hugon J :hugoff
Wow! I :love it-that was so well written.You really have a way with words...very eloquent.

[J!]

:hugon Believeyoucan :hugoff
glad u liked it

:hugon Malenkaya :hugoff
thanx for the kind words... :touched
im actually very useless when it comes to words and expressing myself... im the least eloquent person i know... this was my first and probably last poem
but im happy u guys appreciated it :supergrin

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Jo
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