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LilThought
01-18-2003, 12:58 PM
Lost in Wonderland

If I were Alice,
I would never have
chased after that

rabbit.

Down to that cavity
in the ground
where reality was
lost:

where Alice lost Alice.

Who would have
thought that

Wonderland,

her Utopia,
would feed on her
tears;
steer her from home;
lost, whimpering, alone:

Not I.

Nor I said the Queen
to court
or I Mad Hatter
to guests.

Should I,
Caterpillar to

Alice,

have been less
abrasive,
more lucid,
less Sphinx like?

And you dear child,
should you have been

more clever, less mystified,
more and less, yet not alike
tragic Oedipus?


But where is Alice?

Alice, Alice, Alice…

She’s lost in Wonderland.

believeyoucan
01-19-2003, 04:22 PM
wooahh...that is so creative!
since we are on the subject of alice in wonderland, i feel it is appropriate to use the little :cheshire

keep posting your writings...

J!
01-24-2003, 07:39 PM
just wanted to say that poem is amazing. so eloquently written. i :love it!

thanx for sharing it :hugon lilthought :hugoff