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manifold
01-05-2003, 09:33 PM
she put them all in boxes,
in separate sterile coffins
wrapped in tissue paper
she planned to visit often

preserving jars and bottles
with tightly fastened lids
vacums of concealed emotions
hiding all she did

but bottles break
and tears escape
and life can't be contained
mirrors hide
a thousand lies
beyond the visual claim


:love Mani

Seabiscuit
01-05-2003, 11:30 PM
Manifold, thanks so much for sharing that great poem! You really express yourself well!

ESB
01-09-2003, 06:33 PM
Manifold-

Thanks for sharing your poem and feelings. I thought it was very expressive.