a poem i'll regret for sure

[manifold]

Not in a good place today at all. Read only if you want to...



can you walk with me
for just a moment
to show that I am loved?
can you hug my body closer
and not feel the bones you touch?
can you quieten the tortured screaming
my brain endures so much?
can you stop my heart from crying
when this body hurts too much?
can you unlock me from this destiny
and the secret darkness that I clutch?
can you take away my sadness
and fill me with your love?


Mani

[Anonymous_Member002]

:hugon Mani :hugoff

Although your poem was really :sad I really liked it. You express yourself so well... it really touched me.

I'm sorry that you feel so bad... but being able to write like that is such a gift. Keep it up :love

[toast]

:love :hugon mani :hugoff :love

you have much talent. this poem was really sad, and i can relate so much right now :sad .

take care.

[manifold]

Thanks

Thats all i can say right now

Mani

[precious petal]

Just came by to see what u were up to and....here is one of your gems..straight from your core.....you are so rich and warm in your craft Mani...I salute your gift..I know that it is part of your healing to let the pain out, let it be expressed, honoured and given its rightful place and that is your choice what you do with it. I feel humbled every time u share your soul with us in this way. You deserve to be held, loved and to have your search and quest answered......the secret is in WHO is it really that will answer your call to be held...deep in u u know the answer to that..look inside and find that inner strength that I PROMISE you with all my heart IS there for u...I know it and I can feel it..asking for help through your poetry is a healthy step to getting to know the real you that weathers all storms with a peaceful silent glow..
Luv PP xxx ( I am going away for a couple of weeks..till ********th..I have faith in U and your journey xxxxxx ((((((((((manifold)))))))))))

[manifold]

thanks pp
I can always count on you to encourage me. I really appreciate your reply.

Let me know when you are away till. The numbers didn't come out on your post.

Will miss ya heaps regardless of how long you are gone

:love Mani

[ruthieeee]

((((manifold)))

such a sad poem, but it says sooo much!!! yea u defo are good with words...thx fo sharing :) i really like this poem....

ruthie

[Kdestiny]

:hugon Mani :hugoff

It's beautiful!!

[precious petal]

Hey there Mani :****xxxxxxxxxxx
I am back!! got your reply to my reply.......
Have you looked inside of you to feel and see who will do the holding of you?
Love pp xxxx

[divagirl]

:hugon Manifold :hugoff

You should not regret this. It's really chilling and powerful. Keep writing!...

love,
amy

[andytails]

:hugon manifold :hugoff

hun :love ya so proud of what you wrote..... i think it express what alot of us feel but cannot or do not say...

:yay for you

:gimmehug

:bandwagon

[drifter]

:hugon manifold:hugoff

It is a fantastic poem you get to the heart of so many feelings keep writing.


nicola

drifter:uk:flower

[manifold]

I wrote this poem at the beginning of the year, when i was thinking about someone i know. A lot of good things and bad thing have happened since but i am seeing him for the first time since last November on Saturday.

I think i want to give him this poem, it might be a while until i see him again, if i see him at all.

Do you think it would be ok to give someone? I thought i would make a card and put it in?? I'm really not sure, i don't want to look stupid either!!

Any ideas?

[Suck_The_Fystem]

I'm not usually an emotional person but this brought tears to my eyes,
Thank you so so so much for gracing the world with your words. xxxxx