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dreya
10-13-2002, 07:35 PM
I thought I was someone else
Unwilling to risk
Convinced myself I had no need for connections
I thought all that was over now -
Reassured myself with my carefully woven illusion

A gentle touch like a drop of rain on my face, my mouth
The rational became irrational
The stone turned into an ache, a painful twisting,
a need
something alive.
When I wasn’t looking everything changed.
Slumber unending becomes awake becomes feeling becomes pain
Too much to look at
So I closed my eyes and lost my mind.

rowgirl
10-13-2002, 07:43 PM
:hugon dreya :hugoff

Thanks for sharing :happy

Mimi
10-13-2002, 10:14 PM
:hugon Dreya :hugoff

Thanks for sharing this :touched~you are a beautiful and heart-felt writer:love.

ChristinaMarieR
10-13-2002, 11:01 PM
:hugon Wow, Dreya :hugoff Very :touched