REALLY shy about posting this...

[Gabbie]

Wrote this but it's pantz isn't it????

Push the pain outside so it will show,
Red river tears rush-a fast and steady flow,
A grotesque but yet necessary action,
It remains her sole means of coping such fraction.

Oblivious to the pain she doesnt feel,
She wonders when did her life suddenly stop being real?
Did the barricades she herself created,
Stop the love and the compassion being unto her reciprocated?

For this sad and broken doll,
Longs for long to unfold,
Her wings to be healed,
And one her fragile body to hold.

[toast]

beautiful. very very beautiful.

[wooley]

wonderful poem! :love


Thanks for posting it, i :love 'd it and have printed it for further use. :boink

:vroom

[Gabbie]

Am SO :touched thanks sooooo much guys :shy
U are all so sweet!

[pixy]

Hi. Just wanted to say that I enjoyed reading this poem. It really touched my heart and made me think about my own life.

[Gabbie]

:hugon Heather :hugoff
thanks so much for replying-it really means a lot! im glad my poem spoke to you a little bit :shy

[pippen]

:hugon Gabbie :hugoff
the poem is beautiful
thanks for sharing it

[kiara]

:hugon :love Gabbie :love :hugoff

Thank you for sharing that poem, it was very beautiful, and it really :touched me. :love

[Gabbie]

:hugon HopeMadison :hugoff
it's sooo not beautiful but thankyou for being so kind :shy
:hugon Kiara :hugoff
again...thankyou! it's far from beautiful though :touched

[rainbowswirl]

:hugon :fishjump Gabbie :fishjump :hugoff

Hiya hon :winky

I'm proud of you for posting this, as you should be too. Believe in yourself, you have a talent, ok?

Take care.

:love and :kiss as always.

[newfaith]

loved the poem

my real name is gabbie and u r the only person i have ever seen to spell it the same way as me!

keep goin
luv ya

[Gabbie]

:hugon Jen :hugoff
Thanks so much-you're such a babe! I really wouldnt say it's a talent but :touched

:hugon Gabbie :hugoff
wow! that's so cool-i've never met another Gabbie spelt in same way either :supergrin.Where are you from?

[Gabbie]

Sorry to bump this up but found my old poem and described how im feeling :shy

[Lykka]

:hugon Gabbie :hugoff

:touched Very cool! :touched

Someone wants to dance for U...

:robot


:love :kiss
Lykka

[rainbowswirl]

:hugon :fishjump Gabbie :fishjump :hugoff

Hey Gab! :yay It was nice to see your name on the lists of posts.

I'll text you later ok, promise.

PS. Someone wrote you out a christmas card today, and is going to send it!! :cute

[lion]

:hugon Gabbie :hugoff
:yay

[Gabbie]

:hugon Lykka :hugoff
Aww thankyou! I loved the dance :winky

:hugon Jen :hugoff
Heya hun! Thanks for replying-you're so kind.I will look forward to getting your Christmas card-did you get mine? Hope so! :cute

:hugon Lion :hugoff
Wasn't :cool at all but thankyou!

[Malenkaya]

Please can i bump this up...?
:shy
May enter in competition? Any thoughts???

[ajia]

:hugon my fav :uk :hugoff

i like it...i like it a lot:yay

[Malenkaya]

:hugon Ajia :hugoff
Thanks honey!!!