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chnacatsunflwr
09-28-2005, 07:39 AM
mmmmyeah this just kind of came to me. so hopefully someone will like it hahah. we'll see.




Now when I look in the mirror,
The girl looking back isn’t me.
Instead, she’s a girl who puts
Mia before Mommy
Starving before sisters
Deprivation before Dad.

This girl puts
Famine before friends
Bingeing before boys
Lying before learning,
And purging before playing.

Now when I look in the mirror,
The girl looking back is someone else.
I don’t know how she got there,
But she sure as **** isn’t me.


...you can use your imagination on the stars :-D xoxo,

Mjay
10-20-2005, 02:41 AM
hey sweet heart
loved ur poem..culd really relate to it..keep up the awesum poetry u got a talent luv !
love always
mjay
:lubdub

maybel
10-23-2005, 03:07 PM
:yay short but true and to the point, nothig sugar coated, i am right there with you, always feelin like this must be someone else ...

NoKatyDidnt
10-23-2005, 04:29 PM
I really like it!!!

chnacatsunflwr
10-27-2005, 01:02 AM
yaaaay !! thanks guys hahah. the nice things that you said made me go like this :cheesy ...i didn't even think they'd put it up here.